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[T.O.N.I.T.S. 20A]

Hm. Could be better, especially that overly-long beginning. Still, this song has some nice parts and gets better as it goes along.

Finnsfolks responds:

Yeah, I guess it could've been better. I guess that's what I get for trying to create one of the last songs in the game first. XD

[GD Legends Seg. 3]

Not quite as good as your others. The mixing was a bit off, and the volume was inconsistent. Also, the drop or whatever that was at 0:54 was completely out of place in my opinion. That part did, however, sound better than the rest.

Finnsfolks responds:

Yeah, I agree that this one sounds strange. Definitely not my best one, other than the Phobos Vox parts.

[(PREVIEW) -Melodic Dubstep-]

First of all, get rid of all that annoying ticking before the melody comes in at the start. Then, remove a lot of the repetition and make your changes stand out more. Five minutes into a song is too late for a dubstep drop. Focus on dynamics. Start off quiet in a 20-40 second long intro that gradually increases in intensity and volume. Then, with your first verse of the melody, which should be about 45-60 seconds long, have a nice, memorable melody that shifts every 8-12 seconds. Then, you need a section where it all slows down and gets quiet, which should basically involve removing and fading out certain parts of the melody over the course of about 15 seconds. From there, you should have a short little interlude, maybe a piano or strings section, lasting 10-20 seconds. Then you should start building up to your drop by adding in a reprise of your melody on top of that interlude, lasting about 15-25 seconds. Key here is to really focus on building intensity through volume, composition, and maybe even tempo if you want. Then, at it's peak, have a 1-second long extended note or something of the sort, kind of hanging in the air. Then do a drop. The drop should last anywhere from 30-70 seconds. It depends on how important you think it is. Make sure you have even more variation here than anywhere else basically. It's also a good idea to follow the general pacing and rhythmic pattern of the melody, and you should throw in a few chords from there every now and then to tie it up. Avoid making it just a copy of the first verse with some harder drums or random sounds. That NEVER works. Take it seriously and spend some time on it. After the drop, you need to move on to another bridge. Return to another quiet interlude with a quick (3-5 second-long) fade. Then, once you've faded it out, over the course of the next 10-15 seconds you should build back up into a verse 2 of your original melody. This should be about the same length as your first verse, with the same or similar instruments. Avoid making it just like the first verse, though. You should add a bit more. Change up the drums, add another arp, or something. Maybe both, and a little more. When your 2nd verse is done and if you just want a song with one drop, go ahead and have a breakdown in intensity. Over the course of 8-12 seconds, get to an interlude which slowly gets quieter and then fades out.

Now, I'm not saying you need to follow those instructions 100% of the way. Art is interpretive. However, the most successful melodic dubstep songs I've seen seem to follow a similar structure. It just makes sense. By the way, you have a nice melody. It just needs development. Try looking at Lockyn's work if you need inspiration. He makes house and melodic dubstep, and he's got it down to a science.

Squeegee4554 responds:

Thanks :)

[Rukkus - Fairydust (Ravitex Remix)]

Great remix of a great song!

Ravitex responds:

thanks!

[Volt]

Not bad m8.

Lockyn responds:

thanks!

[Foreverbound - Stereo Madness (Zyzyx Remix)]

Good intro I guess, but it was too fast. That first drop at 0:36 was unexpected considering how different it was from the beginning, and I liked the strings throughout. The biggest problem, though, was that all the cool parts were too short and the meh parts were too long!
Solid 7/10.

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

Okay thanks for your feedback! I'll take it into consideration :)

[Twilight Piano]

Nice playing! You know, this would sound awesome with some strings.

DivineHalcyon responds:

Hey, it's about time I figure out how to make it sound better. Have to learn how to work with FL Studio first...
But yes, adding some strings would enhance the melody, and make it sound much more like Twilight Techno.

[Pokemon GO!]

Great instrumentation and vocals! I wonder if in the future we will look back at songs like these and cringe, just as we did with FNAF and Minecraft?

Jimmypig responds:

I looked back on it and cringed 30 seconds after I made it.. GOOD

[T.O.N.I.T.S. 3C]

gr8 m8. We need to get Step in here to look at this!

Finnsfolks responds:

Thx. Also, Step? As in the guy that composed Polargeist?

[FD - The Stillness of Hope]

Woah. 9 and a half minutes. Holy arse, man! You get at least 3.5 stars just for that.
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The intro is pretty long. My ADHD is triggered right now.
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2 minutes in. It's still fairly uneventful, but *gasp* here come some choir OOHs! Perfect!
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Okay, I like it so far. It's just LONG. If you were to condense it all down into a minute and a half and make it into a four minute song where this is just the intro, that'd be cool.
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4 minutes in, and I feel like this may just be a menu loop. If it is, good choice, because I can imagine it perfectly. If not, GET TO IT!
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The ambience is killing me.
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Spookt to death
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Dead.
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Song isn't even 2/3 done yet
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RIP

ForgottenDawn responds:

gr8 meme m8 2/10 not enough stars