Dude holy crap, this is so good! Your hard work really paid off. Like you said, it's not very similar to the original, but I don't see that as a fault. That's a really good thing! More of your skill shines through the more you innovate off of the original song.
The instrument choices were a masterstroke here by the way. Every single one works perfectly. And holy cow I LOVE what you did from 2:37 to 3:15, it sounds like a beautiful movie score! I love this so much.
Lol thanks, i might have a shitload of songs coming in the next few months
This song is just beyond great! There's so many cool intricacies in it, and it's epic from start to finish! I think its sizable length is one of it's great strengths, as it makes the tonal shifts really feel more authentic. The violin and what sounds like choral AHHHH tones accompanied by the phat ominous bass in the first minute of the song are just... brilliant! The drop is amazing, particularly the parts at 1:30 and 1:50 that come in to cap it off. The after-drop is also really good, how it suddenly gets all quiet. I imagine it's like being in an underground cavern and something is sneaking up on you. Then the frantic DnB half-drop at 2:44 is amazing as well! It's like a boss fight, or a chase sequence. The piano that comes in after that at about 3:10 is hauntingly beautiful (I kinda wish we heard more of that melody) and then the build up to drop two just knocks it out of the park! Those ominous pauses where you just hear the violin strokes in between the bass parts are really suspenseful and they do a killer job of making you anticipate what comes next. And then drop two... WOW! It just takes everything great about the first one and accentuates it. So freaking good!!!! The synth at 4:57 carrying into 5:40 is also a really neat touch. And then finally, let's talk about that ending. The ending is stunning! I wish the song was even longer, because I could totally imagine an even MORE insane third drop after that. But I think it would be too much for mortal ears to handle.
All in all, easily the best Duocore song in my opinion. I remixed it recently, and I'm so glad I did. Being able to make something to complement a work of art as good as this song is, like, an incredible honor.
Really an amazing job! This sounds just like the rukkus style in all all the best ways. I may be in the minority for liking the first drop a little more than the second one, but they're both really good, and the rest of it is supremely superb as well! Definitely "best of" material.
Every second of this slaps. Great melody, fantastic drop!
This feels like fun video game lobby/title screen music. I like it. :)
What this remix really gets right is song structure. For instance, in the first 30 seconds, you did a great job of continuously intensifying the tone. It's a proper build-up, done really well. Every section of the song is well-balanced, and each one is just about the right length in proportion to the overall piece. One thing it's lacking is variety in terms of melody. It would have been cool if you were to move beyond the original 10-note pattern as the piece progressed, building on it in some way and getting really creative with it. This remix is short enough, though, that it's excusable enough.
You're really improving a lot!
Thanks! While I definitely agree that I could have been more creative with the melody, I'd say the last 30 seconds or so are probably worse, with those random noises.
You've got impeccable, ridiculously enviable skill. This is nuts!
Pretty darn sweet! Sounds a tad too similar to Atom Sampler though, almost like this piece is an add-on to that one. Epic nonetheless!
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