Not bad for its short length. I don't know anything about the original, but this was good. It reminds me of a Boom Kitty song. However, if it were longer, I would advise you change up the usage of that "ooh" sound, because it was annoying.
Not bad for its short length. I don't know anything about the original, but this was good. It reminds me of a Boom Kitty song. However, if it were longer, I would advise you change up the usage of that "ooh" sound, because it was annoying.
Yeah, I kinda agree with you on that. If I decide to revise it, I'll fix that part first.
Very good, but it would probably be better if you sped up the tempo substantially
You're only 14? We're the same age! Shh. It's a secret tho. Nice job with this song. It's a bit more varied than your other ones, but that part with the silence was weird.
Oh yeah - what the hell is that doing there? Thanks for telling me. I'll remove that now!
EDT: DONE!
It's certainly an improvement, but still lacks structure.
Ok, I see what you mean. This song was actually a test in which I started improving the way I make buildups. Thanks for letting me know I'm steadily improving.
Not bad! Just a tad bit repetitive, and I think the bass should have been changed up at some point because it really got annoying. 8/10
Appreciate the criticism. Thanks!
Decent but boring. Not much else to say. Nice melody.
I have a new song for Thanksgiving. Maybe you could look at it?
I agree with the squeegee
I know, but if you guys want, I can try again. :)
Um... This has a lot of problems. I mean, a ton. For starters, it doesn't sound at all like the original. For another thing, there is no structure at ALL. It seems like you just randomly placed premade loops down everywhere, which, by the way, is not allowed.
I'm a new song maker, so I'm not the best. I didn't violate any copyrights or anything, it's just I'm not very good. Plus, this is my first remix.
Edit:
And I remixed by ear, or more specifically, remembering what it sounded like.
Nice! Very unique style.
Thank you! :)
Good, but lacks depth. Plus it should be longer.
Thank you !, I will make it a longer version if enough people are interested. Rioght now, I am working on other music projects !
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